It all started with a surfing class. Cassandra simply wanted to give her girlfriend/lover Julie a treat while they visited Santa Cruz. She herself has taken the class three times already and has never managed to stand up once. Managing to sit on a board without tipping over is an accomplishment for her.
But this time the class will end differently. She will get her first encounter with a strange nightmarish vessel straight out of history. A thing her early seagoing ancestors had fought and believed destroyed.
And to make matters worse, THE SHIP has sensed her and the psychic powers she possesses. THE SHIP is alive and now wants to make her a part of it. After all…. EVERY SHIP NEEDS A NAVIGATOR!
*This is an experimental blurb I’m considering using for the back/inside book cover for my novel THE SHIP* I’d love some feedback on it so please leave comments below*
The novel is more than halfway done (as far as 1st drafts go) and I hope to capture the audience’s imagination and interest.
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Hi Allan. I think to me this is quite a good start. – To catch my attention personally I would eventually recommend you one simple sentence of Cassandra’s sensitive feelings and emotions here where the X’s are:
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But this time the class will end differently. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX She will get her first encounter with a strange nightmarish vessel straight out of history. A thing her early seagoing ancestors had fought and believed destroyed.
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But this is only a recommendation of mine and other people might completely disagree on that, ok?
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Thanks Raani, I’ll keep that in mind. Nice to know I did okay for a first try.
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